9th Combo - [Video]

[redcladidealist]

[The feed comes on with Lloyd looking off to the side, talking to someone off screen.]

-sure wish I could have turned homework in like this back home! Then even if I waited until the last minute I could still-

Oh, hey, it's on.

[Lloyd looks into the camera, looking incredibly pleased with himself.]

Professor, we did it! We got our homework done! And we're even getting it in early.

[Before the original two week deadline, in fact! Are they trying to give Raine a heart attack?

He doesn't seem to realize that this isn't locked to Raine at all, that everyone can see this.]

Here, you can read it now. I wrote the stuff in blue, and Luke did the stuff in black.

[That said, he turns the starfish around so that the view takes in a table with five pieces of paper on it.]





and no one would be confuzed. You need apo appo appostrofees to becos they show were your missing letters like in don't.


"apostrophes", I think. We're supposed to spell right too, right?

There's some other ones in here too, but I don't think it's important.

Anyway, yeah, lists are better. But like, if you can't do a list, then it's better to use them. You know, stuff like "Anise, Natalia and Tear went to buy things".

There's also this thing

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That's like a period but not. But I don't use it unless I feel like it.


(Note off to the side next to the line about spelling -> I dont think so she just sed we were suposed to write about gramer)


I don't evan know what that is. Why do you need an extra thing for a peroid if its just a peroid?

You have to use capitel letters to becos that's for names and things. If you don't use one than you don't know if your talking about Colette's dog Carmel or about carmel candy. You also have to use them at the begining of sentances but I don't know why.


(Beside the previous note -> I don't know, she sounds pretty strict. But if you say so.)

… You know, I don't know either. Maybe it's just to let people know you're starting a sentence, but shouldn't that be obvious enough with all the periods and stuff?

But yeah, you also have to capitalize the I. "i am Luke" isn't right, but "I am Luke" is.

Apostrophes can also shorten words, so they're good to have. You can shorten up "is not" to "isn't", and would of to "would've".

Or wait, is it would of or would have? The last one sounds right, but…

(And a small note -> Guy would know, ask him.)


They both sound fine to me.

Any way that's why grammer's importent. Its also importent becos profesor Raine seys it is. Their's probabley more stuff we forgot but we only have to write five pages so that's it!

Lloyd Irving
Luke fon Fabre

(Note at the bottom -> Man I'm so glad thats over.)

(Me too.)


[OOC: Replies may come from either Luke and/or Lloyd. o/ Context for those interested.]

Comments

To Luke but either can answer~

[dualpunishment]

Geeze Luke, with all that journal writing I thought you'd be better at grammar! At least you're better at it than the other kid.

[redcladidealist]

Wha-? Hey! My grammar's just fine! What're you even looking at our homework for? I sent this to Professor Raine!

[dualpunishment]

Might wanna check that filter again, kid! Everyone and their mom can see it with all your horrible spelling.

[redcladidealist]

Hey, I'm not a kid! I'm older than you! And my spelling's not that bad!

[Yes, yes it is.]

[dualpunishment]

It really really is. B-e-c-o-s isn't actually a word you know.

[redcladidealist]

Sure it is. "I wrote that paper because my teacher told me to." See? Because is definitely a word.

[dualpunishment]

Yeah but that's spelled b-e-c-a-u-s-e, not the way you spelled it! Not to mention all your other spelling errors. Didn't you go to school?

[redcladidealist]

[Lloyd's face is quickly turning red.]

Of course I went to school! My teacher's even here, too! You can ask her if you don't believe me!

[dualpunishment]

Maybe you need a new teacher.

[redcladidealist]

There's nothing wrong with my teacher. She's the smartest person I know!

[Lloyd might not particularly like listening to her lectures, but he won't stand to hear her insulted.

...well, unless it's about her food.]

[dualpunishment]

Maybe you're unteachable, then. At least Luke can spell.

[Lloyd you are just digging yourself a worse hole.]

[redcladidealist]

[You hear that, Anise? That's the sound of buttons being pushed.]

I'm not unteachable! I learn plenty of stuff! Just because I'm not the best at spelling doesn't mean anything!

[dualpunishment]

Uhh.. right, sure.

[Subject change!]

How'd you meet Luke, anyway?

[redcladidealist]

My friend Guy introduced us.

[If he still sounds like there's a little bit of a huff in his voice, that's because he's not quite forgiving Anise's insults just yet.

He's also going to assume he must have mistaken someone else for Luke that first time he thought they spoke, because Guy had insisted that that was someone else.]

How do you know Luke?

[fabrecation]

Hey, shut up, Anise! I don't exactly write for everyone else, you know!

And Lloyd's right; what're you even looking at this for?!

going with the assumption that all text looks like fonic script to them

[dualpunishment]

Like I told him, you put it up for everyone to see! Well, at least you have an excuse. And your spelling's pretty good, actually.

[Look at her giving you a compliment, Luke~ Althought... Hmm...]

He's from a different world though, right? How come he knows how to write in our language? I know speaking there's some kind of translation thingie but does it work on text too?