caughtinanetwork | 9th Combo

[The feed comes on with Lloyd looking off to the side, talking to someone off screen.]

-sure wish I could have turned homework in like this back home! Then even if I waited until the last minute I could still-

Oh, hey, it's on.

[Lloyd looks into the camera, looking incredibly pleased with himself.]

Professor, we did it! We got our homework done! And we're even getting it in early.

[Before the original two week deadline, in fact! ~~Are they trying to give Raine a heart attack?~~

He doesn't seem to realize that this isn't locked to Raine at all, that everyone can see this.]

Here, you can read it now. I wrote the stuff in blue, and Luke did the stuff in black.

[That said, he turns the starfish around so that the view takes in a table with five pieces of paper on it.]

and no one would be confuzed. You need ~~apo~~ ~~appo~~ appostrofees to becos they show were your missing letters like in don't.

"apostrophes", I think. We're supposed to spell right too, right?

There's some other ones in here too, but I don't think it's important.

Anyway, yeah, lists are better. But like, if you can't do a list, then it's better to use them. You know, stuff like "Anise, Natalia and Tear went to buy things".

There's also this thing

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That's like a period but not. But I don't use it unless I feel like it.

(Note off to the side next to the line about spelling -> I dont think so she just sed we were suposed to write about gramer)

I don't evan know what that is. Why do you need an extra thing for a peroid if its just a peroid?

You have to use capitel letters to becos that's for names and things. If you don't use one than you don't know if your talking about Colette's dog Carmel or about carmel candy. You also have to use them at the begining of sentances but I don't know why.

(Beside the previous note -> I don't know, she sounds pretty strict. But if you say so.)

… You know, I don't know either. Maybe it's just to let people know you're starting a sentence, but shouldn't that be obvious enough with all the periods and stuff?

But yeah, you also have to capitalize the I. "i am Luke" isn't right, but "I am Luke" is.

Apostrophes can also shorten words, so they're good to have. You can shorten up "is not" to "isn't", and would of to "would've".

Or wait, is it would of or would have? The last one sounds right, but…

(And a small note -> Guy would know, ask him.)

They both sound fine to me.

Any way that's why grammer's importent. Its also importent becos profesor Raine seys it is. Their's probabley more stuff we forgot but we only have to write five pages so that's it!

Lloyd Irving
Luke fon Fabre

(Note at the bottom -> Man I'm so glad thats over.)

(Me too.)

[OOC: Replies may come from either Luke and/or Lloyd. o/ Context for those interested.]

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If you would like, Lloyd, I can teach you as well. It seems as if your professor may require some assistance.

[Link has an excuse, he's nine years old on the inside. So is Luke, really. What's yours, Lloyd?]

Aw man. You want me to study, too? Isn't one teacher enough already?

I had three tutors growing up. I've found that oftentimes, having more than one person explain a concept can clarify it considerably.

[Ahh, memories... she hasn't been tutored since she was 10, and she misses it something terrible.]

Three teachers?

[Brb, boggling at her. In a town as small as Iselia they're lucky to have one teacher.]

So they expect you to learn three times as much?! How do you even have the time?

Ahh...? No, they cover the material that a single teacher would. Have you ever had one person attempt to explain something to you and you didn't understand it at all, but then when someone else tried to explain it, it was much easier? That is the advantage of having three teachers. Chances are, one of them will be able to get through to the student.

Well... I guess... Sometimes Genis and Colette could explain things Professor Raine tried to teach me but I couldn't get when she tried to say it. Usually when I don't get something, though, I just... don't get it.

[Can she just accept that he's bad at school and leave it at that? It's awkward discussing his shortcomings like this.]

Edited 2012-07-02 03:57 (UTC)

It's always worth a try though, don't you think? I won't force you.

[Yet.]

[Lloyd shuffles his feet reluctantly. Sorry, Zelda, but he just doesn't want to study.

...can I get back to you on that? Later?

[Much, much later. In fact, he'll most likely forget, and secretly hope that she does, too.]

["Later", huh. Zelda smirks at the camera.]

Very well. Later it is.

Okay. So, uh, later then.

[He offers a small wave, then turns the SFC off before Zelda can change her mind.]

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