redcladidealist: (First of all...)
redcladidealist ([personal profile] redcladidealist) wrote in [community profile] caughtinanetwork2012-06-27 06:26 pm

9th Combo - [Video]

[The feed comes on with Lloyd looking off to the side, talking to someone off screen.]

-sure wish I could have turned homework in like this back home! Then even if I waited until the last minute I could still-

Oh, hey, it's on.

[Lloyd looks into the camera, looking incredibly pleased with himself.]

Professor, we did it! We got our homework done! And we're even getting it in early.

[Before the original two week deadline, in fact! Are they trying to give Raine a heart attack?

He doesn't seem to realize that this isn't locked to Raine at all, that everyone can see this.]


Here, you can read it now. I wrote the stuff in blue, and Luke did the stuff in black.

[That said, he turns the starfish around so that the view takes in a table with five pieces of paper on it.]





and no one would be confuzed. You need apo appo appostrofees to becos they show were your missing letters like in don't.


"apostrophes", I think. We're supposed to spell right too, right?

There's some other ones in here too, but I don't think it's important.

Anyway, yeah, lists are better. But like, if you can't do a list, then it's better to use them. You know, stuff like "Anise, Natalia and Tear went to buy things".

There's also this thing

;

That's like a period but not. But I don't use it unless I feel like it.


(Note off to the side next to the line about spelling -> I dont think so she just sed we were suposed to write about gramer)


I don't evan know what that is. Why do you need an extra thing for a peroid if its just a peroid?

You have to use capitel letters to becos that's for names and things. If you don't use one than you don't know if your talking about Colette's dog Carmel or about carmel candy. You also have to use them at the begining of sentances but I don't know why.



(Beside the previous note -> I don't know, she sounds pretty strict. But if you say so.)

… You know, I don't know either. Maybe it's just to let people know you're starting a sentence, but shouldn't that be obvious enough with all the periods and stuff?

But yeah, you also have to capitalize the I. "i am Luke" isn't right, but "I am Luke" is.

Apostrophes can also shorten words, so they're good to have. You can shorten up "is not" to "isn't", and would of to "would've".

Or wait, is it would of or would have? The last one sounds right, but…

(And a small note -> Guy would know, ask him.)


They both sound fine to me.

Any way that's why grammer's importent. Its also importent becos profesor Raine seys it is. Their's probabley more stuff we forgot but we only have to write five pages so that's it!

Lloyd Irving

Luke fon Fabre

(Note at the bottom -> Man I'm so glad thats over.)

(Me too.)


[OOC: Replies may come from either Luke and/or Lloyd. o/ Context for those interested.]
blessedbyfarore: (little smile)

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[personal profile] blessedbyfarore 2012-06-29 02:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh - you're Luke, right? I never had to write in Hyrule, so I guess I'm not used to it.
fabrecation: (DERP)

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[personal profile] fabrecation 2012-08-15 08:18 am (UTC)(link)
... You never wrote? Not even to remind yourself of anything or...?
blessedbyfarore: (um)

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[personal profile] blessedbyfarore 2012-08-18 03:44 am (UTC)(link)
Not really! I mean, I knew letters and things... and Saria helped me make a chart to show how big the fish I caught was. But I didn't write reminders or anything.
fabrecation: (Scramble)

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[personal profile] fabrecation 2012-08-18 07:08 am (UTC)(link)
That's so weird...

[And upon realizing that could be taken the wrong way:] N-Not that... you not writing is weird, it's just... well, I'm just used to writing just about every hour of the day, talking about what happened and everything. I used to hate it, but it just feels weird to try stopping now.
blessedbyfarore: (investigating)

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[personal profile] blessedbyfarore 2012-08-20 11:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Really? [He pulls a bit of a face at that.] I just talked to Saria about what I did. Besides, a lot of the time we just did the same things during the day. Why did you have to write stuff?
fabrecation: (My name...)

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[personal profile] fabrecation 2012-08-22 08:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, uh... My doctors said that I could read it all again, in case I lost my memories again. Then at least I could have them written down and maybe trigger something.

[Not that that... matters anymore, or he even lost his memories in the first place. But he won't mention that.]
blessedbyfarore: (uncertainty)

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[personal profile] blessedbyfarore 2012-08-23 01:40 am (UTC)(link)
Oh... I didn't know you lost your memories. [That sounds kind of sad, actually.]
fabrecation: (YEP everything's fine really)

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[personal profile] fabrecation 2012-08-25 12:49 am (UTC)(link)
[It's hard, to go back to the way he thought before he learned the truth about himself. But he'll try, at least for this.]

It's okay. I can't do anything about the future if I just keep focusing on the past, right? [He really ought to follow his own advice.]
blessedbyfarore: (little smile)

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[personal profile] blessedbyfarore 2012-08-28 07:17 am (UTC)(link)
I guess so. [Link smiles a bit, but it's sort of... tentative and awkward-looking.] I'm trying to get used to being in Vatheon, so I guess it's my future.
fabrecation: (You ask to leave)

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[personal profile] fabrecation 2012-09-02 06:22 pm (UTC)(link)
[God, he doesn't want to think of it that way.]

Well... maybe. But isn't getting back home part of it, too?
blessedbyfarore: (don't like the look of that)

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[personal profile] blessedbyfarore 2012-09-02 10:12 pm (UTC)(link)
[The smile drops a bit, just leaving 'tentative and awkward'.]

Well, um... Ican'tgoback. Besides, I've made friends here! And the free food is nice. [Another smile, but ouch, strained much?]
fabrecation: (Say it enough and it'll be true)

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[personal profile] fabrecation 2012-09-08 03:03 am (UTC)(link)
[Why can't you go back?

... It's what he wants to ask, anyway. The knowledge that someone can't go back, not even saying that they will in the future or anything, is enough to make a sick feeling in Luke's stomach show itself. If Link can't go back, then what if...

But Luke already knows he's overstepping a boundary. So, he just smiles in return, a little strained as well.]


The free food is pretty nice, huh? I still can't get used to it.
blessedbyfarore: (little smile)

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[personal profile] blessedbyfarore 2012-09-08 06:55 am (UTC)(link)
[Link doesn't answer immediately, caught up in his own thoughts. He's not the only one - if Sola is ever sent back, he'll suffer the same fate. It would take something drastic to be able to return as they are, living, but only provisionally.]

[He could be sent home tomorrow, and have no warning for it, never realise that his life was about to end again.]

[It's better not thinking about it.]


Yeah - there wasn't much free food in Hyrule - we had to find our own in the forest, but you had to pay money in the town. I got in trouble the first time I went there since I didn't know that. [Smile - he's trying?]
fabrecation: (Worst bedtime story ever)

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[personal profile] fabrecation 2012-09-14 06:13 am (UTC)(link)
No kidding? So did I. I actually got arrested for it; how was I supposed to know, anyway? I'd never bought anything for myself before that!

[Luke's trying, too. And why not share an amusing story over his own failure to help with that?]
blessedbyfarore: (little smile)

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[personal profile] blessedbyfarore 2012-09-14 12:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Really! [Quietly relieved, actually. It's nice to know he's not the only one who found himself in unfamiliar surrounds.] Someone realised I was from the forest and paid for me then told me not to do it again, so I didn't get arrested - were you okay?

[It's not a bad distraction, really.]
fabrecation: (Scramble)

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[personal profile] fabrecation 2012-09-20 01:55 am (UTC)(link)
Yeah. Things got cleared up, but not before I was practically manhandled by a bunch of - [Oh, no no no, he can't keep going with that. He winces to himself, ducks his head and rubs the back of his neck.] Some of the villagers.
blessedbyfarore: (hmph)

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[personal profile] blessedbyfarore 2012-09-20 12:20 pm (UTC)(link)
[Huh, bit of a pause there. Link notes it curiously.] That's good. Someone grabbed my shoulder and it was kind of weird because I had never seen someone that big before, but if it was a whole lot of them, that would be kinda scary.
fabrecation: (Unsure unsure)

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[personal profile] fabrecation 2012-09-23 10:24 am (UTC)(link)
One of them grabbed the back of my collar and hung me up in the air like I was some kind of dog.

...

I mean, I acted badly enough, but still. [...] And they apologized after it all got cleared up. I was still pretty mad though... [It was silly of him, now that he thinks back on it.]
blessedbyfarore: (little smile)

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[personal profile] blessedbyfarore 2012-09-24 11:33 am (UTC)(link)
There were dogs in the market at night. [He says it almost absently, not quite realising it was out loud.] It's good that everything got cleared up, though! It would have been unfair if we got into trouble for something we didn't even know.
fabrecation: (I'm no one special really...)

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[personal profile] fabrecation 2012-10-02 11:06 am (UTC)(link)
[He makes a faint noise of acknowledgement with the dogs - market, huh? Like Chesedonia...?

But he pushes that aside in favor of chuckling sheepishly.]


I sure did learn my lesson, anyway. I never did that again. Heh, even now I keep wondering if someone's going to call me a thief or something when I get something from the store.
blessedbyfarore: (cheerful)

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[personal profile] blessedbyfarore 2012-10-02 01:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Me too! Especially if I go buy milk from the Nostalgia Nook then go take food from the food store. If I ever have to pay back all the food I've eaten, I'm gonna be in a lot of trouble. [Said with a bit of a laugh, but it's true. He does eat rather a lot...]