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[The feed comes on with Lloyd looking off to the side, talking to someone off screen.]

-sure wish I could have turned homework in like this back home! Then even if I waited until the last minute I could still-

Oh, hey, it's on.

[Lloyd looks into the camera, looking incredibly pleased with himself.]

Professor, we did it! We got our homework done! And we're even getting it in early.

[Before the original two week deadline, in fact! ~~Are they trying to give Raine a heart attack?~~

He doesn't seem to realize that this isn't locked to Raine at all, that everyone can see this.]

Here, you can read it now. I wrote the stuff in blue, and Luke did the stuff in black.

[That said, he turns the starfish around so that the view takes in a table with five pieces of paper on it.]

and no one would be confuzed. You need ~~apo~~ ~~appo~~ appostrofees to becos they show were your missing letters like in don't.

"apostrophes", I think. We're supposed to spell right too, right?

There's some other ones in here too, but I don't think it's important.

Anyway, yeah, lists are better. But like, if you can't do a list, then it's better to use them. You know, stuff like "Anise, Natalia and Tear went to buy things".

There's also this thing

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That's like a period but not. But I don't use it unless I feel like it.

(Note off to the side next to the line about spelling -> I dont think so she just sed we were suposed to write about gramer)

I don't evan know what that is. Why do you need an extra thing for a peroid if its just a peroid?

You have to use capitel letters to becos that's for names and things. If you don't use one than you don't know if your talking about Colette's dog Carmel or about carmel candy. You also have to use them at the begining of sentances but I don't know why.

(Beside the previous note -> I don't know, she sounds pretty strict. But if you say so.)

… You know, I don't know either. Maybe it's just to let people know you're starting a sentence, but shouldn't that be obvious enough with all the periods and stuff?

But yeah, you also have to capitalize the I. "i am Luke" isn't right, but "I am Luke" is.

Apostrophes can also shorten words, so they're good to have. You can shorten up "is not" to "isn't", and would of to "would've".

Or wait, is it would of or would have? The last one sounds right, but…

(And a small note -> Guy would know, ask him.)

They both sound fine to me.

Any way that's why grammer's importent. Its also importent becos profesor Raine seys it is. Their's probabley more stuff we forgot but we only have to write five pages so that's it!

Lloyd Irving
Luke fon Fabre

(Note at the bottom -> Man I'm so glad thats over.)

(Me too.)

[OOC: Replies may come from either Luke and/or Lloyd. o/ Context for those interested.]

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[...She's not sure she should be surprised.

But--]

The Professor gave both of you homework? [Giving homework to Lloyd makes sense, but to Luke too?]

[Coleeeeette, pity him! ;-;]

She saw us writing to each other and said we were both bad at it. She didn't even care that he's not her student. She made him do it, too.

[Okay, that's actually...kind of amusing. She giggles.]

I'm not that surprised! She did get Zelos to help her teach us math for a little bit during the Journey after all.

I guess that's true... I still didn't get most of it, though.

So, I guess it's like the Professor has a special power that she can use to make anyone do school. She can make them teach or study whenever she wants!

[Time for wild theories?]

I guess he isn't that good at teaching in a way you understand.

[She understood most of what he was trying to teach them...

Okay, Lloyd, that's... She starts giggling again.]

Maybe! I don't think she can make people study whenever she wants though...

[Wild theories are a go--]

Maybe it's like how Dirk can get you to learn things! She can convince people to teach or study even a little!

No, he really wasn't.

[He takes a moment to mentally compare Raine to Dirk in his head, trying to figure out how she could teach him in a way similar to his adoptive father did. What he comes up with...

Lloyd swallows, growing a little pale and nervous.]

Dad wouldn't let me eat dinner until I memorized one of the dwarven vows. What if Professor Raine made you eat her cooking if you didn't study for her?

[Oh. Oh dear. Colette looks a little pale herself.]

That'd work, but...Let's hope not! [Please say the Professor doesn't see this--]

She likes her cooking though, so she wouldn't, right?

Yeah, definitely.

[He shakes his head.]

I dunno. She likes her cooking, but if she thought it'd get us to study... Do you really want to find out?

No. [She shakes her head as well.

Nononononono. Raine's cooking get awayyyyy.]

I guess we should study when she tells us to so she won't try.

Aw man...

[He walked right into that one.]

Let's just make sure we never mention it to her so she doesn't get the idea.

[She laughs.]

Alright! What if she gets the idea anyway?

Then we run and we hide and we never talk to her again except with our starfish things.

We could do that! Or we could just study together for a little bit and we wouldn't have to worry about her finding us with her cooking.

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What Lloyd said. I've never even written a paper before this.

[Wait... She blinks.]

Never?

Heh, nah. All I had to write in was my diary back at home. This whole thing kind of makes me miss it... [Which is strange, considering he always found it a pain to write in every day. He has a new one now, but... it's still not really the same.]

You had a diary? Did you write everything that happened in your journey in it?

[He probably went on a journey too, didn't he? It'd make sense if he did, since he never had to write a paper and so probably didn't go to school, at least not like the school Colette went to.]

I wrote letters sometimes but not about things that happened most of the time.

Yeah, I did! For a while I kind of had to. But now... I don't know. It just felt weird to not write in it. [And after a pause:] And I don't even have to anymore... [The doctors said it was just in case he lost his memory again. And he never lost it in the first place.]

[She tilts her head. Asking why he had to probably wouldn't be the best thing...]

If it feels weird not to write in it, then you should just get another and write in that one! I don't think it matters if you have to or not.

I already got one with a friend I made here. Still, it's already filling up pretty fast! It's kind of small compared to mine. [Which was this big fancy blinged out one, but hey. It's been with him for years.] I keep wondering if I can get mine back sometime... Probably not.

[Well...people had gotten things at the Christmas thing right after Zelos arrived....]

Maybe it will show up! There was a festival where people got things that could fit in a stocking in this place's December. That'll be in a while, but if you're still here, you might be able to get it then!

December? ... Where's that?

Um...It's the month before the end of the year here. I'm not sure what you'd call it.

You mean Lorelei Redecan? ... So wait, the months here aren't like ours?

Lorelei Redecan? [She tilts her head. That's something that's different.]

Yeah, the months here are different.

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